Presentation result

I got my mark back on my presentation

I got B :D

Assessed - Mark Value - Mark/Percentage/Grade
Focus Question:  3  -  2
Influences & Methodology:  4  -  2.5
Experiments & Testing:  4  -  3
Overall Presentation:  4  -  3
Total:  15  -  10.5  70%  B

Learner feedback:

Bethany, your presentation fulfilled the requirements outlined for this assessment task. You've submitted a structured and correctly APA referenced speech and powerpoint. You have a broad focus question that will need significant refinement as your project develops, and you have provided a competent analysis of some relevant influences. You have also provided a competent in your trials and testing to date, along with some evidence of planning for the weeks ahead.  Overall, your presentation was well presented and structured. You've clearly demonstrated your preparation and work to date.

I AM HAPPY WITH THIS GRADE! I PASSED

With this mark, what would, if I got a redo, do to improve my grade?

• Improve my question once again and this time include how I will change the colours
• Review what I said about my influences and methodology and improve in areas that seem unrefined
• Show more examples of my experiments and how they help me move forward
• Speak clearer and slow down my speech

I asked Bex (tutor) where I slipped up so that I can target my improvement towards where I need improvement. She stated that

I was almost 3/4 of the way there. I had a lot of great work but there was room for improvement. I do need to work with how I present my presentation, which she did note that I am getting better with my stage fright. I just need to improve how I show my work with word choices and also how much I show/explain my work.

I will do much better next time. Now to continue my work