Composition and Framing

Composition and Framing

Here is a links to what I am following;
https://nofilmschool.com/2015/02/composition-framing-help-tell-great-stories-cinematography
https://nofilmschool.com/2014/11/focal-elements-fibonacci-30-minute-depth-study-composition
I also have the well over 300 paged PDF of everything involving composition and framing; 

I showed tutor Rachel my work and she suggested that I look at different romantic comedy's to better my framing. She liked my script-writing but didn't understand my animatic much at all. This is also due to the images I mashed together were only paper scanned images put into Storyoard pro.