Treatment

I have had my treatment done for a few days but forgot to post it to my blog.

Also, I have shown my Script-Writing to my class and a man called Duncan Sarties. Duncan has had a lot of experience with story creating and writing.

Here is my current treatment and logline, I might upgrade it yet.

Logline: The classic love story between a little robot and a camera.

Treatment:

The light and bright yellow sun shines as a little robot sits in the field holding a camera. The robot is happily beeping away to the camera as if alive. Robot picks up some flowers and presents them to the camera. The robot smiles lovingly into the camera, then looks up and rushes off into the distance.

Both robot and camera now sitting on a hill, camera suddenly falls sideways onto robot. Although surprised, robot bashfully/shyly hugs camera in response.

Wandering further into the lush field, robot spots two unique objects intertwining. Robot contemplates the objects then glances at camera, thinking about them together. Shocked by imagining the possibilities, robot quickly dashes away before camera can see.

Whilst standing on the edge of the world robot, overjoyed with natures beauty, reaches for camera and twirls around and around while the sun lights up the air.

The sun suddenly disappears as robot spots an old rusty tool laying in the grass. Expressionless, robot has a sudden flashback to negative memories thought to be deleted.

Distorted reflections of two robots deeply in love under the moon flash before robot’s eyes. One robot is suddenly being taken? No, dragged and vanishes from the other robot’s view. The robot left cries desperately longing for the others return. Abruptly, the light given off from the missing robot is now shining from the box of a camera.

The suns return indicates the end of the flashback. Robot faces camera looking at camera’s light. Robot smiles coyly and cuddles camera close as the bright evening sun silhouettes the two.

End